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  • Writer: Jeremy Niles
    Jeremy Niles
  • Sep 8, 2018
  • 1 min read

“His writings are so depressing He hardly is impressing” “Well that’s not all true He writes on other thing too” “But what about all that crap About death and dying — a gap Between poems of life and death No I’d better save my breath I’ve got no need to level this writing Meager and trivial, indeed it’s distracting From true poetry and prose” “And what oh great pontificator is that He doesn’t write in manner so flat Or one dimensional just bemoaning death Or life, I think he tries to capture breath The feelings in each inhale and the vital Emotions swelling and swirling volatile Poems sad to be sure but feeling valid That can’t be denied, nothing squalid Or vulgar words just poems about being” “Regardless he doesn’t post enough So I’ll unfollow “ 


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